Freudian Slip
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I guess that I might be off subject here sorry.
Song writting tips are hard to come by beyond the simple stuff like don't repeat words close together if possible.
But there in is the irony. One guy will repeat words to beat hell time after time and even using the same word to make lines rhyme.Some times it works some times it does not. Can you get people caught up in the emotion of the son to where the don't pick up on the obvios problems in the lyrics? We are all our own worst critic. The general listener does not always pick up on thing like that in a song where as in a poem it might seem extremely amateur.
Other problems like writing generic songs can torment people but anyone who has been at it for a while knows it has all been done before. This does not mean go ahead and rip off other peoples stuff and change it just enough but rather avoid the pitfall by writing emotions not songs. The other key to avoiding well used material is to clear your mental pallet. Do not listen to the radio or CD’s for a while. Do not subject your self to top 40 for god’s sake. Allow your mind to work without the influence of well established successes. I have always been into pretty heavy music but THE COFFIN SONG which is referred to in my other post has a country type of feel to it that was not planned. Years ago you would be hard pressed to find me in the country section of a music store and you would never see me flipping threw the CD’s. I would have died of embarrassment. (I still own no country CD's) The point is the coffin song came out of me pure with out prejudice. I did not worry about the fact it might have a bit of a country sound, in fact I did not even know it until it was down on tape. Am I going to change it because I don’t particularly like country music? Hell no. It is a creation that is my own, It was made without the guarding of my pride in mind. I am not worried about getting ribbed about it from buddies loyal to the likes of Slayer or Judas Priest. They can like it or not. The only thing I care is that it packs emotion. Emotion is the one and only aspect that with out a doubt must be present in music for others to relate. Not all will relate and some will hate it. So what? Your emotion will make your music your own, it will override the basic rules. It can free you to write without standing over your own shoulder.
Write an emotion. Try to find another way to say it than the norm. But if it needs to be straight forward then go with that as well. Just get into the emotion.
No two people feel exactly the same. There for your writing will have it's own passion and personality.
depperly@crpud.net
www.freudian_slip1
Song writting tips are hard to come by beyond the simple stuff like don't repeat words close together if possible.
But there in is the irony. One guy will repeat words to beat hell time after time and even using the same word to make lines rhyme.Some times it works some times it does not. Can you get people caught up in the emotion of the son to where the don't pick up on the obvios problems in the lyrics? We are all our own worst critic. The general listener does not always pick up on thing like that in a song where as in a poem it might seem extremely amateur.
Other problems like writing generic songs can torment people but anyone who has been at it for a while knows it has all been done before. This does not mean go ahead and rip off other peoples stuff and change it just enough but rather avoid the pitfall by writing emotions not songs. The other key to avoiding well used material is to clear your mental pallet. Do not listen to the radio or CD’s for a while. Do not subject your self to top 40 for god’s sake. Allow your mind to work without the influence of well established successes. I have always been into pretty heavy music but THE COFFIN SONG which is referred to in my other post has a country type of feel to it that was not planned. Years ago you would be hard pressed to find me in the country section of a music store and you would never see me flipping threw the CD’s. I would have died of embarrassment. (I still own no country CD's) The point is the coffin song came out of me pure with out prejudice. I did not worry about the fact it might have a bit of a country sound, in fact I did not even know it until it was down on tape. Am I going to change it because I don’t particularly like country music? Hell no. It is a creation that is my own, It was made without the guarding of my pride in mind. I am not worried about getting ribbed about it from buddies loyal to the likes of Slayer or Judas Priest. They can like it or not. The only thing I care is that it packs emotion. Emotion is the one and only aspect that with out a doubt must be present in music for others to relate. Not all will relate and some will hate it. So what? Your emotion will make your music your own, it will override the basic rules. It can free you to write without standing over your own shoulder.
Write an emotion. Try to find another way to say it than the norm. But if it needs to be straight forward then go with that as well. Just get into the emotion.
No two people feel exactly the same. There for your writing will have it's own passion and personality.
depperly@crpud.net
www.freudian_slip1