"Not sure I would really consider this a dance track.
It's a little slow for dance, IMO.
Well done though. I could see this in a video game or movie."
Yup I feel about the same.
Just the only things I would say to flesh out the track, would be things I would do with it. To bridge the gap of electronic and organic sounds...perhaps some feedback/harmonics of an electric guitar through out. That could meld in with the other backing pad sounds floating around, interact with them even just though the random modulations that would be there. As for the Spanish guitar...I like it well enough, just I feel it comes off a bit to clean/slick whatever. There are millions of ways to dirty it up...first thing I would try would be killing some of its high eqs, then screwing around with mid and low eqs ( maybe a tape echo on it at times even ). Perhaps doing some more striking variations on its themes could help as well...ending on another note ( perhaps a lower one ) screwing with pitch bend ( to prebend notes even ) could give more life. Near the start of the song...would let the single bass note come in a few times ( four to eight ), before I placed the drums with it mostly for the reason of dynamics. Tons of random things that could be...
Other then my random...I enjoyed the track and feel its a good foundation to build on, and even think it has merits as it stands alone now.
"Bass lines aren't melody."
This is to land of the lost for me...
Maybe if the femaile (sic) vocals were in there it'd be another story.