We the Students Competition(School-Help wanted)

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so you basically saying you want to be a songwriter..ie ghostwriter in RAP..

right?
 
oh - my bad - hell thats a good one - i really think that its more about personal inspiration than anything else . . we'll see what others say . . .
 
LOL..what problem you have...

you write just like you writting it for yourself... put you have to make it real hot..

now-a-days you can use your song as an example so artist can get a feel for the song..look at the producer for Cassie..
 
Noddy301 said:
When I say write music im speaking on...writing a hott hook, writing verses, just like an emcee....take for example NeYo or P Diddy....ya feel me??
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Question is, do you want to rap, too?

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P.S. - Sorry I couldn't getcha a hot verse on that track bro, I'll try harder next time. :(
 
For R&B I can feel this. On some rap I can understand it but don't really support it.

This is why.

Hip hop and rap has a LOT to do with being individualistic in your lyrics. You can call yourself a rapper all day but if someone is constantly writing your words for you to speak, that's being dishonest to yourself and your potential fans IMO.

Now with R&B and sung material, I think that the person's voice and emotions over those words helps individualize them, not the content itself.

But with all that being said, some people make money off writing other people's shit for them. In the risk of being and sounding hypocritical, I've done that myself years before I ever made a beat. But I don't do it anymore because it felt dirty to see this "so called emcee" using my shit like he's reading a teleprompter in his head.

I probably opened up a nice fat ass can of worms with this but what's ya'lls thoughts.

Fiev,
 
LOL ahhh the ghostwritter......

I cant tell you how many times cats have come to me wantin me to be a ghostwritter.... I've done it b4 and would do it again if the cake is right ("thats why the call me Mr. He About His Paper") I feel like as long as im not spitting other people stuff Im str8 i could care less if other people want to rhyme something I wrote cause I can write rhymes for days.....

As far as becoming a better writter like you said noddy you started with poetry thats half the battle right there now you gotta figure out what direction you want to go with it.... do you want to be a punchline rapper a real life rapper what.... its all about taking those emotions you got and putting um into words ya dig... alot of time when I sit down to write for 1 its pretty much always to a beat for me a 2 I just freestyle for a second to sorta get the direction I wanna go with the verse and take it from there....

dont kno how much this essay I just typed helps but hey
 
gullyjewelz said:
yo what up - i guess i missed tjhe submission - thats cool - but if u gon do a "street" version - holla - lol -

i cleaned it up but just a little - prolly still too . . . anti

let 3- fifths of man spit it raw to the beat -
i got the right to bear arms n im drawin the heat
just exercisin my ammendments - why? keep them fit
put those words on the fork n have u eat them shitz
from sun up to sundown - been known to work things
since 1555 - till they carved the 13
got writing skills like the best of em from G-Dub to jefferson
never known for smilez but black women i get wit dem
u can find me in the first - when i speak, write, and practice
plus im in the 4th keepin foolz who try to jack this
knocked on theirs – so watch the clock on theirs
cuz due process a stop a crooked cop on theirs
when the judge see they grudge – aint no re-up toolz
to know the ledge on double jeopardy -is G-d up Jewelz
got a jury of his peers - and right to bail
i stack cheddar - so i'll never spend a night in jail
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My bad G I didnt see "shitz" up in there, can you chop that part out please? you can just not say anything at all on that part and I'll add in a sound effect on that part
 
Noddy301 said:
My bad G I didnt see "shitz" up in there, can you chop that part out please? you can just not say anything at all on that part and I'll add in a sound effect on that part
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Maybe you could split that part and reverse it...so whats with the track GJ you on it or not?

Just seeing the direction this went and lovin' it.

Fiev.
 
Noddy301 said:
My bad G I didnt see "shitz" up in there, can you chop that part out please? you can just not say anything at all on that part and I'll add in a sound effect on that part
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you could just reverse it and add a effect instead of havin him go back and chop it..... unless he aint record it yet
 
well i may be screwed out of this - my cpu has just went "out" on me again - im tryin to get it "back" -

i have a version that i recorded before i made changes - feel free to listen but if its too raw - i understand - if i get the cpu back tonite then i will record it 2nite
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=55018

this version took care of "shitz" but i still got "slept wit dem" and the other stuff in there

like i said, if its too raw - im mad cool wit dat!! w/o my cpu - im dead in teh water to rec. anything.
 
G that version right there is cool as is...do you still have the session with just the vocals on there? If so we can just line it up as the fourth verse
 
yeah im gon try to get it 2nite or at 5 am (if u can wait that long) - i finally got my cpu to work, now im transferrin all my project files over to a new external hard drive
 
Oh Aight G!...So you're gonna match the vocals over the track or just record it over real quick so you can match the intensity of the track to close it out with a bang?
 
i will download it - the other version is at somebody's soundclick page rite? i will git that and respit to match
 
Ok Ok cuzzo I see you....its on the 3rd page 3rd from the bottom
 
That was perfect G!...you got the right one actually that was Fyre, KT, AND Fiev on that version....Its a rap thanks fam...Im about to make a thread so the rest of the fam can peep it if they already havent
 
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