We the Students Competition(School-Help wanted)

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Whats up mi familia! I was wondering if anyone was interested in helping me with a constitutional law project...However this isnt the "average" project..its creative arts therefore I have the choice to create a musical peace...heres the catch its a "We The People" Theme and it has to be on an American constitutional right, principle, case, decision or problem... I can make the beat all I need is one OR two emcees to help the young blood out by blessing his beat with an on topic 16......... Its due next Friday


Noddy
 
Noddy301 said:
Whats up mi familia! I was wondering if anyone was interested in helping me with a constitutional law project...However this isnt the "average" project..its creative arts therefore I have the choice to create a musical peace...heres the catch its a "We The People" Theme and it has to be on an American constitutional right, principle, case, decision or problem... I can make the beat all I need is one OR two emcees to help the young blood out by blessing his beat with an on topic 16......... Its due next Friday


Noddy
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I could try =/

Whats the basis have to be about? I could rap about freedom of speech, right?

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thats a pretty easy one imo...... i would say seein as it is hip hop make it about the 1st amendment freedom of speech right especially seein as there probly wouldnt be a hip hop in the since that we kno it now with out it
 
Good looks fam...so the beat will be up tomorrow and yall can see if yall vibin' off of it or not and yall can suggest changes or what not....THANX YALL!
 
Noddy301 said:
Good looks fam...so the beat will be up tomorrow and yall can see if yall vibin' off of it or not and yall can suggest changes or what not....THANX YALL!
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I be watchin you. ;)

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let me at that beat -
i got the right to bear arms n im drawin the heat
exercisin my ammendments - just to keep them fit
put those words on the fork n have u eat them shitz
 
gullyjewelz said:
let me at that beat -
i got the right to bear arms n im drawin the heat
exercisin my ammendments - just to keep them fit
put those words on the fork n have u eat them shitz
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Nice one, But I'm not sure if you can use profanity for a school project? :confused: ;)

Waitin' for Noddy to post up the beat
Knowin it'll make me stand and move my feet
I'll take the first ammendment and use freedom of speech
I won't curse when I say butt, I'll use the word Breech
It has the same meaning, but it makes you think
Suckin up to the dictionary like on a man would a leech
I don't have the rhymes, and the flow of gully jewelz
But I thought I'd throw somethin up, since there aint no rules

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ha ha - i know - i will edit it if i actaully drop it - but your response was hot too - lol

no cursin - hee hee
 
gullyjewelz said:
ha ha - i know - i will edit it if i actaully drop it - but your response was hot too - lol

no cursin - hee hee
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I tried my best. ;) I haven't been making songs lately, because I've been working on my lyrical ingenuity, to try and get better at writing before I even attempt to get good at spittin'. You've got some good brains behind them words yo. Keep it real bruh.

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Let me drop a Gem on you folks: thinkin bout the reprocussions of if my freedom of speech was revolked:
It wouldnt be fair but now its getting clear: cause I say things the people in power just dont want you to hear:
I guess Im something to fear, but i wont harm ya : 20 wit Pac skills n political mind of Barak Obama:

quick 6 haha.... had to get in it 2 lol
 
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Let me drop a Gem on you folks: thinkin bout the reprocussions of if my freedom of speech was revolked:
It wouldnt be fair but now its getting clear: cause I say things the people in power just dont want you to hear:
I guess Im something to fear, but i wont harm ya : 20 wit Pac skills n political mind of Barak Obama:

quick 6 haha.... had to get in it 2 lol
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Nice one. Definitely.

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Ok Ok I see yall...gimme a lil bit of time...:D...almost done fammo
 
Noddy301 said:
Ok Ok I see yall...gimme a lil bit of time...:D...almost done fammo
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Sounds good bro, can't wait to here wutchu got pumpin' out them speakas ;)

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Noddy301 said:
My Bad fam! sorry i took so long I had to make a run....but heres the beat let me know what I should change or take out OR add in....most importantly let me know if you're vibing to it.....It has room for two artist...3 without a hook so...whos down fam???

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5225892&q=hi
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I'm diggin the beat bro, a way different style, but I like the smoothness of it, and the fact that it's really flowin' to a way you could spit out some political nonesense to it.

I'll download it, and see if I can spit a line to it, definitely. It'll take a couple times through to decipher the chorus/hook from the verse parts of the beat, but I'll download the beat and record my vocals, and if you like it, take it, if you don't, s'all good, just another project for me to toss aside. I see the difference in the beat, now though. Just heard the chorus part. :)

I'll throw down somethin and post it tomorrow sometime, I have a job interview so I might not have time, but I'll definitely try to get it done. :)

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EDIT: Just thought I'd get a headstart on the writin' since it takes me a bit, so I'll post the first part, and you can tell me if it's good enough for this project or not, if it's not, I'll stop, if it is, I'll continue. Let me know what you think, a.s.a.p.

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The first ammendment states that I have freedom of speech
The words comin outta my mouth are way too high to reach
You won't understand anything that I have to preach
But, the words will stick to your brain, suckin your blood like a leech
Theres a few of those ammendments that I have intentionally passed
I ignored them when I heard them cause I knew they wouldn't last
The second ammendment says I have the right to bear an arm
But the 5th states only if I can do it without any harm
The 7th one says that I have the right of trial by jury
Knowing my luck the 8th ammendment will be blurry
If I commit a crime the punishment will be in a hurry
Beat me til someone comes and then they all scurry
It doesn't seem to matter if I'm 18 and I can vote
By the 26th ammendment, I have lost all of my hope
Livin day by day, and packin my heat
Runnin off at the mouth due to freedom of speech

Good lookin' out bro, hope I can help.
 
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let 3- fifths of man spit it raw to the beat -
i got the right to bear arms n im drawin the heat
just exercisin my ammendments - why? keep them fit
put those words on the fork n have u eat them shitz
from sun up to sundown - been known to work things
since 1555 - till they carved the 13
got writing skills like the best of em from G-Dub to jefferson
never known for smilez but black women i slept wit dem
u can find me in the first - when i speak, write, and practice
plus im in the 4th keepin foolz who try to jack this
knocked on theirs - pull the glock on theirs
and due process a stop a crooked cop on theirs
and once i beat the case aint no re-up toolz
to know the ledge on double jeopardy -is G-d up Jewelz
got a jury of his peers - and right to bail
i stack cheddar - so i'll never spend a night in jail
 
gullyjewelz said:
let 3- fifths of man spit it raw to the beat -
i got the right to bear arms n im drawin the heat
just exercisin my ammendments - why? keep them fit
put those words on the fork n have u eat them shitz
from sun up to sundown - been known to work things
since 1555 - till they carved the 13
got writing skills like the best of em from G-Dub to jefferson
never known for smilez but black women i slept wit dem
u can find me in the first - when i speak, write, and practice
plus im in the 4th keepin foolz who try to jack this
knocked on theirs - pull the glock on theirs
and due process a stop a crooked cop on theirs
and once i beat the case aint no re-up toolz
to know the ledge on double jeopardy -is G-d up Jewelz
got a jury of his peers - and right to bail
i stack cheddar - so i'll never spend a night in jail
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LOL..Gully this is nice.. but i think its a little to hardcore for a school project..it sending a wrong message to the children of the world ..change up a few thing to keep it clean..

never known for smilez but black women i slept wit dem
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say maybe "never known for smilez but black women i know them"


plus im in the 4th keepin foolz who try to jack this
knocked on theirs - pull the glock on theirs
and due process a stop a crooked cop on theirs
and once i beat the case aint no re-up toolz
to know the ledge on double jeopardy -is G-d up Jewelz
got a jury of his peers - and right to bail
i stack cheddar - so i'll never spend a night in jail
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guns and cops and beating a case- is sending the wrong message..just change it up a bit..:D


Noddy you even think to make it Spoken Word over you beat?
 
lol - i got you - im on my way to work - so im gon work on it later -
 
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