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is it that hideous? does is make you cringe? am i really retarded? is there any hope for me?
the dividing line

the dividing line
Dogman said:I think the lead tone is a bit squealy....but this could easily be put into shape.![]()
You don't even live in Florida anymore...Sissy....TravisinFlorida said:come on, i'm not a sissy. i can take some good o' bashing. bring it on!
COOLCAT said:i like the second take a lot better. sounds like you did more than work on the guitar.
I've got Mick Jagger here.,...mayb e you'd like to make a comment Mick?
"yeah bloody fhkng ell itsh fhkng right rot fhkng bloody ell man ya ya".
There you have it.![]()
Nothingface said:this is what you get when David Bowie and the Sex Pistols have a three headed love child. Cool tune!![]()
Bulls Hit said:Yeah very cool. Reminds me of Carlos Alomar on Bowie's Low. The mix is kinda cloudy, you could cut somewhere down low if you wanted but it doesn't bother me. Rock steady, I like it
Fancy said:It's Pavement-esque. I like the lead guitar alot!
rayc said:I LOVE the sqeal tone. This is the basis of a good song. Has some of the feel of Berlin era Iggy (that was david B playing guitar mostly) also reminiscent of J Masics on the lead line flow.