Hmmm, I preferred the first mix, to be honest. I can't hear the kick now. I thought the balance was a little better in the first one. Well, your tones and EQ sound very good, this one is mostly about levels now, in my opinion. Perhaps the vocals could be brightened a little, eq-wise. The bridge vocals drop out in spots, check that out.
Really good tune here and a nice recording as well. Post any remixes here.