Wag the Dog

[RAMI]

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Sorry guys. I got to excited about the music in this tune and posted it too quick. The vocals really have to be re-done.

Thanx to Whitestrat and Cobaltaudio for posting. I really have to re-work this.

 

[WhiteStrat]

Overall, I think the mix lacks a bit of bottom end. The punchy bass at the beginning is perfect, but after that it seems to be asking for more bottom end. The vox definitely aren't too low--maybe a tad low, but I didn't have any trouble hearing them either.

The extra percussion in this one is awesome, the perfect complement to the funky guitar lines. And I gotta say, the stereo mix sounds great to me--very full and textured!

 

[RAMI]

Overall, I think the mix lacks a bit of bottom end. The punchy bass at the beginning is perfect, but after that it seems to be asking for more bottom end. The vox definitely aren't too low--maybe a tad low, but I didn't have any trouble hearing them either.

The extra percussion in this one is awesome, the perfect complement to the funky guitar lines. And I gotta say, the stereo mix sounds great to me--very full and textured!

Thanx alot White. I got no problem bringing up the low end, if that's what it needs.

 

[cobaltaudio]

Yeah I'd say a bit more bottom end too. Not in the snare though, that's plenty thick enough
Have you double tracked the vocals, or got some chorus on them or something?

 

[cobaltaudio]

Ah, forgot to say that to be honest I don't like the ambience/reverb around the snare. I'd have something longer but less of it, or just less of what's already there if you're keen to keep it short. (But then I am a big fan of snare plate reverb )

 

[RAMI]

Yeah I'd say a bit more bottom end too. Not in the snare though, that's plenty thick enough
Have you double tracked the vocals, or got some chorus on them or something?

Thanx man. I'll bring up the low end. I double tracked the vocals.

 

[RAMI]

Ah, forgot to say that to be honest I don't like the ambience/reverb around the snare. I'd have something longer but less of it, or just less of what's already there if you're keen to keep it short. (But then I am a big fan of snare plate reverb )

OK, thanx for that. I wasn't sure how to treat the snare. At first, I wanted the drums pretty dry, but when I found them too dry, I decided to put a sort reverb on them. It might not have been the best choise. Thanx a lot.