Totally from a production point of view...it's way too loud for the music and you need to cut between the words where I can hear you drawing breath. Then you need to EQ the very low end of the vocal where there is noise.
Hey Mart, too loud for the music? i don't think..
This was just a test, so no problem about the breath..
The noise is from Fast Track USB's preamp but soon i will upgrade to Pro (& i will order a new mic)..