very rough - heavier/metalish electronic song

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This one reminds me more of Manson, or NIN...very industrial, and distorted. I like it. Has a cool beat to it. Very driving. To me, everything seems to sit well. Vocals are hidden amidst the noise, which in this music, they should be. I think the solo could come up a bit, but just a little. It sits within the song, and maybe could stand out a little. Other than that, it left me wanting more. It has some elements that make you want to dance, and has some harshness that is very dirty. Kind of a cool mix of stuff.
Nice tune Gary....very cool..
Ed
 
This is pretty cool man. Gives me a real white zombie vibe too. I like the electronic/heavy mix going... sounds good. The vocals are well done too.
I do agree that the rhythm guitar takes over the solo a tad too much, bringing up the lead should fix that.
Also for the ending, it sounds like you could do more with that. Like I'd love to hear the guitar solo come back with the chorus still going, then maybe a final screaming chorus with the guitar to close it out.
Cool song man ;)
 
dogs thanks alot!

I agree with you both after a few listens that the solo could come up, I also like your idea about extending the ending. Still early on so im sure i got alot of owrk in front of me with this one.

Thanks a lot for the advice guys

take care
gary
 
Cool song. On the backbeats there's what sounds like a processed snare that's got a strong upper midrange emphasis... sounds to me like it's dominating the mix too much... getting in the way of the vocal and guitars which are very nicely done.

Tim
 
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