Venus - Check the mix

[dcall]

New tune.. First time with a real Guitar in the break and the end.. Looking to make sure it sounds right

Thanks..
The original is - Venus..
http://www.soundclick.com/pro/view/01/default.cfm?bandID=313920&content=music
Thanks again

 

[Monkey Allen]

Sounds good to me, more bass drum?

 

[rayc]

Excellent voice.
Song's pretty good too.
The stoccato of the sample really is effective.
The guitar o/dub works fairly well too though I'd be interested in what you'd have used instead.
Well recorded.

 

[rayc]

Bumpity bump

 

[Ray J]

Pretty good song. THe main riff is catchy, the arrangement was nice and I thought the tune had good energy