untitled, unfinished song

[mjr]

Copyright 2007, Monte Richardson

Here goes:

There's a lot in this world I can't do
but I know I can love you

There's a lot in this world I'll never be
but I know I'll be in love with you

There's a lot in this world that I'll miss
but I know I won't miss loving you, 'cause I do

 

[Freddy]

Hey Monte.

Hard to comment yet to be honest. Let's watch it develop...

Hmm.. maybe the last couplet is off a bit. Surely you would miss that the most?

 

[up-fiddler]

It has a nice "hooky" start to it. I might elaborate on what it is I couldn't do and what it is I'd never be and then draw the listener back to the fact that it doesn't matter with the chorus. Anxious to see where this one goes.