Untitled dance track

[Halion]

At the end of last schoolyear I decided I wanted to go study Music Technology (which is an education at a music school comparable to a college level). But to get accepted I had to write and produce three songs: A film score, a pop song and a dance song. The pop song is called Life from a side-view and can be found in another topic in this forum. The dance song I made has no title. You can find it here:
http://www.clownfleur.nl/dance

Any and every feedback is welcome. I know that dance is not my strongest point, however, I have done quite a bit of research and work on it, so now I want to know what you all think

 

[distortedrumble]

i dont have an ogg player so i cant help ya...can you make it an mp3?

 

[LemonTree]

I can't play the Betamax version, sorry

 

[Halion]

c'mon, no ogg support? That has been around since like, Winamp 2! (2001 or something?).

I'll see if I can fix up an mp3.

 

[xfinsterx]

I played it in OGG format just fine.
Youre a talented fellow Halion. With a fine set of aspirations.

But really. This IS the the
"MP3 CliniC!".
Give em what they want.

 

[Halion]

Thanks and I'm learning every day!

 

[Halion]

Alright, an mp3 version is up.