Two more for you to rip up.

[REEK BROCK]

Check these out.Thanks in advance.

 

[tone_aot]

I like that shining joint. The only thing is the bassline isn't clicking with it. If you created a hot bass line to throw in there, that would be hot in my opinion. Your comin up man. Keep up the good work reek!

 

[REEK BROCK]

I like that shining joint. The only thing is the bassline isn't clicking with it. If you created a hot bass line to throw in there, that would be hot in my opinion. Your comin up man. Keep up the good work reek!

Thanks man thats what I need.anyone got any other comments.

 

[REEK BROCK]

Need some feed back bad everybody.

 

[EastSideBoss]

Yo keep it comin you getting better , im starting to like your Music

 

[Che Frone]

Shining- yeah definitely a step in the right direction in my opinion. but like the other guy said, the bass doesnt really fit in (I actually can't tell if thats just a reverbed or an 808 drum or actually bass) right now. But i think it has a nice, cool feel to it.

Chaos-once again, not too bad. but repetitive melody gets annoying, maybe it should come in every 16 bars or so, like a hook. I dunno

 

[REEK BROCK]

Shining- yeah definitely a step in the right direction in my opinion. but like the other guy said, the bass doesnt really fit in (I actually can't tell if thats just a reverbed or an 808 drum or actually bass) right now. But i think it has a nice, cool feel to it.

Chaos-once again, not too bad. but repetitive melody gets annoying, maybe it should come in every 16 bars or so, like a hook. I dunno

Thanks I'm going to see about a new bass line for it. i gotta see what I can do about chaos tho cus It sounds so plain without the melody.

 

[REEK BROCK]

Yo keep it comin you getting better , im starting to like your Music

thanks man ,it makes it all worth while when i hear something like that.

 

[REEK BROCK]

More feedback!!!