Two more for you to rip up.

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I like that shining joint. The only thing is the bassline isn't clicking with it. If you created a hot bass line to throw in there, that would be hot in my opinion. Your comin up man. Keep up the good work reek!
 
tone_aot said:
I like that shining joint. The only thing is the bassline isn't clicking with it. If you created a hot bass line to throw in there, that would be hot in my opinion. Your comin up man. Keep up the good work reek!
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Thanks man thats what I need.anyone got any other comments.
 
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Yo keep it comin you getting better , im starting to like your Music
 
Shining- yeah definitely a step in the right direction in my opinion. but like the other guy said, the bass doesnt really fit in (I actually can't tell if thats just a reverbed or an 808 drum or actually bass) right now. But i think it has a nice, cool feel to it.

Chaos-once again, not too bad. but repetitive melody gets annoying, maybe it should come in every 16 bars or so, like a hook. I dunno
 
Che Frone said:
Shining- yeah definitely a step in the right direction in my opinion. but like the other guy said, the bass doesnt really fit in (I actually can't tell if thats just a reverbed or an 808 drum or actually bass) right now. But i think it has a nice, cool feel to it.

Chaos-once again, not too bad. but repetitive melody gets annoying, maybe it should come in every 16 bars or so, like a hook. I dunno
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Thanks I'm going to see about a new bass line for it. i gotta see what I can do about chaos tho cus It sounds so plain without the melody.
 
EastSideBoss said:
Yo keep it comin you getting better , im starting to like your Music
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thanks man ,it makes it all worth while when i hear something like that.
 
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