Torture (Ingedients include a hint of Tool, with an influence of SOAD;Serj)

[cpmusick]

This is a song I've pieced together for a while now. I have it near complete, though I will be rerecording the vocals, as well as adding a new harmony vocal track to really give the vocals what they may be missing.

Please feel free to leave honest feddback\critiques\suggestions. I also have quite a few other songs I'm working on for my album, though they do not have vocals yet (well, not good quality ones).

Here's the link:

STREAM IT:
http://www.garageband.com/mp3player?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSjZFS0ams

DOWNLOAD IT:

Or you can download it from my website:
http://www.ingeniousmastermind.com

 

[Erockrazor]

Vocals are a bit pitchy in parts but the style fits the music well. The vox might be a little up front for me. The whole sound is kinda stiff to me. I might even like it if the guitars were a little more sloppy and real drums would be great. Cool song. I like the distortion on the guitar for the heavy parts, sounds good.

 

[cpmusick]

Yeah, it's definitely not the final recording. I am going to rerecord the guitars, and especially the vocals, and add a second vocal part during the verses to spice it up a bit.