Hi Stringtheory - I love this style of music, so it was very easy listening for me. As far as musicianship and style, I like the feel of the song, and the chord progression fit nicely with the melody. I'm not sure if you consider yourself a singer/songwriter and musician, etc. If you wrote the song - I like it. If you are also the singer, I do have some general feedback on the vocals. I think the singing is nice. It didn't jump out at me as something "special", but please don't take that as an insult. What I mean by that is I think you have a nice voice, but the way you sang didn't capture me or lead me to think you have an edge over many other singers out there. Although your pitch seemed generally good, there wasn't much in the way of dynamics to your voice - seemed one dimensional to me. If you're an experienced singer, you may very well be choosing to sing that way. If you're not and you're looking for ways to potentially improve on your singing, my suggestion would be to try and sing with more emotion and vary your vocal strength/volume accordingly throughout the song. This is strictly my own personal taste, and me being a singer as well, it's always one of the first things that grabs me in a song, and therefore is something I'm used to critiquing! Again, I do like the song and I personally would listen to it over and over because I love the style. I would just tweak the vocals a bit. I'm still a newbie at the mixing part, so I'll leave feedback on that to the pros.
Thanks for posting your song and good luck to you!
Jen