Today It A Lovely Day

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Irwin abrigo

Irwin abrigo

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This song is entitled: "Today It A Lovely Day" This is also my first lyric video. I hope you all will enjoy it. I am asking for your feedback and comments.

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Your melodies need more structure. I think that's the biggest thing you should focus on right now.
 
Yes....I agree with the above. Your melodies are a little too basic to just keep repeating them over and over. Add some changes. The piano part is very basic and some notes are out of time. Keep at it. You have no issues that cannot be solved.
 
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