Ok, I heard it, and I would make the string arrangement a bit more open, with a bit of octave gaps,
But generally it's very well done,
I still think that if you'd take it a bit more to the background it will sound more pleasing and help the song a bit more.
(By the way, if you have a midi file of it and want a string arrangement I can give it a try)
Good luck!
But generally it's very well done,
I still think that if you'd take it a bit more to the background it will sound more pleasing and help the song a bit more.
(By the way, if you have a midi file of it and want a string arrangement I can give it a try)
Good luck!