Hi, I see you are new here. Welcome. A couple of things.
For mixing feedback, we use the MP3 clinic. Great place to get your mix as good as you can get.
If you are asking if your song is good or not, well... None of us here (to my knowledge) are burning up the charts. But we can give decent feedback, but it is subjective and many of us (speaking for myself), would never tell a person if their song is good or not. It is theirs so it is good (IMO).
Now, I think it is a cool song. That snare needs to have something done to it. I think it is way to loud and probably needs some taming on the top end.
The male vocals should come up, and the female vocals down just a tad. I do like the male vocals. I like the vibe of the song, (has that "The Band") vibe.
For the first song, very strong result. Being a recording, I think you go back and do it again, not that there is anything wrong with what you have, but it can always be better and that is why we have little recording studios.
Good stuff, good results. Tame the snare, less cowbell
