I struggled with the two distinct 'looks' - the flipping between them was sort of a bit awkward in my head. The things that stood out were a few things perhaps I didn't understand - at just before 1:00 there's a shaking of the camera, or an effect - either way it looked like a mistake that wasn't fixed, while I suspect it was deliberate? The big thing for me was the aesthetic. Her skin tone in a lot of shots was a nasty yellow - but then in others, the blown out white look. The band look (bar the sickly yellow) I quite liked, but the swap to the domestic 'set' with panelled walls and soft stuff seemed a bit strange. The feel of the band as a whole, was a sort of hardness, but the curled up bits sort of spoiled the band's harder image. Can't comment on the audio - not my cup of tee, but it sounded typical of that kind of genre.
The overblown crushed whites were a bit much in places and the swap from white face to yellow face was a stand out for me. For me, the end was a bit 'oh dear, what can we do to end this....' It sort of stopped, not ended. Does this help in any way?