This Weekend

[Irwin abrigo]

Happy Weekend. Hope I got someone's attention with this original composition of mind song entitled; "This Weekend" any advice will be appreciated.

 

[spantini]

Hi Irwin. I am glad for you to see me, I guar-an-tee.

It's a nice basic rhythm but there's a lot of empty space in there. A couple extra BPMs with some singing and a little Reggae bass line could loosen it up some, too.

 

[Mickster]

Irwin.....the beat is cool and moves along nicely. It's a mover in that regard. However....the synth is too repetitive and the chorus...if that's what you were meaning it to be.....is too sparse and loses the listener quickly. Cut back on the synth lead part a bit. Some of it is too basic anyway. Add some texture with something in the mid range and change up the feel in the chorus.

Remember.....this is just my opinion. You have a good start....keep at it.

Mick