I agree with BK on the lead guitar...it's cool but maybe a little loud. On the other hand, I don't care for the drum sound. I don't know what you have in the way of mics, so that might be the problem. I really liked the bass guitar tone. I think you could probably use a pop filter of some kind while recording vocals, I noticed some mild plosives, but the sibilence wasn't bad at all. One more thing bothered me about the tune...it sounded like the tune was panned primarily in the right ear while the verb was in the left. That was unsettling. Did anyone else notice this?
Don't think that I'm picking on your tune, it's pretty well recorded. I liked the tune. I think it's performed very well. Everything seemed 'in the pocket'. I haven't heard any of your previous recordings, but from what everyone else has said, it sounds like you're improving with each recording and that's great. Keep it up, I look forward to hearing more from you!