Sounds good. Couple of points, I think in terms of being in the same room, some improvements could be made. I don't know what it is, possible the vocal is too loud, or is a bit too crisp? Don't know much about these things, and I'm listening with pc speakers. Secondly, I thought that the vocals sounded too conspicuously like they were recorded seperate from the guitar part if you know what I mean. Something about the rhythm of the vocals, maybe not being 100% compatible with the rhythm of the guitar at times. Other than that i really did like this song. Well done.
Jags