
reshp1
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First time posting in this forum...
My girlfriend is going away to grad school this fall and is having a hard time with the thought of being apart for a year, especially as it's getting closer and closer now. I wrote this song to give her as a going away present. I'll see if I can post a scratch recording tonight, but for now here are the lyrics.
(verse)
Twilight echos silent
Ushers in another...
Day that brings us closer to the end
What were distant rumblings
Are now upon our doorstep
Won't be long 'til we are torn apart
And thrown adrift.
(pre-chorus)
But I do not worry
I have no fear
I am not burdened
By thoughts of despair
(chorus)
I found you once, I will find you again
If it takes a thousand years from now until then
When all that was once lost will be found again
A day when the broken hearted can mend
(verse)
If time erases memory
Of each moment we've shared
Until we are perfect strangers then....
We'll start again
(pre-chorus)
I do not worry
I have no doubt
I have no intention
Of living without you.
Chorus..
I don't really like the second half of the chorus, maybe a little repetitive with the "...find you again" and "...found again" two lines later. Critiques and suggestions are much appreciated.
My girlfriend is going away to grad school this fall and is having a hard time with the thought of being apart for a year, especially as it's getting closer and closer now. I wrote this song to give her as a going away present. I'll see if I can post a scratch recording tonight, but for now here are the lyrics.
(verse)
Twilight echos silent
Ushers in another...
Day that brings us closer to the end
What were distant rumblings
Are now upon our doorstep
Won't be long 'til we are torn apart
And thrown adrift.
(pre-chorus)
But I do not worry
I have no fear
I am not burdened
By thoughts of despair
(chorus)
I found you once, I will find you again
If it takes a thousand years from now until then
When all that was once lost will be found again
A day when the broken hearted can mend
(verse)
If time erases memory
Of each moment we've shared
Until we are perfect strangers then....
We'll start again
(pre-chorus)
I do not worry
I have no doubt
I have no intention
Of living without you.
Chorus..
I don't really like the second half of the chorus, maybe a little repetitive with the "...find you again" and "...found again" two lines later. Critiques and suggestions are much appreciated.