Markd102,
With the solo, personally I think you could cut the last 18 seconds or so out of the Solo. I thought the solo was ending 3 times leading into a verse 3rd time lucky. ;-)
Also, I found it a little hard to hear the vocals in the first verse... I think it had to do with the Flanger guitar in the back, other than that a great song.
What did you record it on?
Porter