istyle,
Actually I thought the sound quality was good. My criticism is directed at your stylistic choices rather than your equipment or production capabilities. To me it sounds like you have quite a lot of underlying talent, but maybe you're just not familiar with much of the truly great electronic music out there.
When I use the word "Phat" I'm not only speaking of a particular sound quality, I'm also talking rhythm, groove, depth..... soul.
I hope don't sound patronizing. I struggle myself to create music which I feel has depth and at least a small piece of the profound. It's not easy.
There are too many to name, but off the top of my head here are just a few examples of electronica recordings I hold as iconic:
Hardkiss - Delusions of Grandeur
David Morley - Tilted
LTJ Bukem - Earth 3
Saafi Brothers - Mystic Cigarettes
Chemical Brothers - Exit Planet Dust
Layo & Bushwacka! - Low Life
Jenö - Emotion Electrique
Cypress Hill - Black Sunday
Kruder & Dorfmeister - K&D Sessions
Metro Recordings - Level 01
Pork Records - Sty Wars
Future Sound of London - ISDN
Adam Freeland - Tectonics
I've tried to include music from various genres. I'm sure I've forgotten many very important ones.
peace

barefoot