The Trinity Project .....another song

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Broken_Hal0

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This one took seven hours top to bottom , wrote lyrics on the fly.....and as usual its all real instruments....I played everything.....and yes it really only took seven hours....same gear as usual creamware , mindprint , rode , At4033 and loads of other stuff....check it

Its called FAKE

http://www.reverbnation.com/trinityproject

Cheers
Neil
The Trinity Project
 
Well sounds good man. I would ditch the vocal effect, you sound like a robot. I think your drums could use some more high end for the snare, it's a bit dull. Starting around 1:45 the strum guitar could be louder, fill in that mid-range. The song is seriously not my style but even so I think it's a bit convoluted. Take lyrics starting from 1:20 for example, you're prancing awkwardly around the issue of not liking this person. 2:01 needs to be re-sung... Other than that the mix is pretty solid, I find.
 
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