
Todzilla
New member
Hey, y'all...
Here's my latest:
I'm pretty psyched at how the production is working out on this. The choruses are nice and jangly and ready for the radio, if not for one minor detail. I'm psyched at how the drums and bass are sounding.
But I welcome all constructive and destructive feedback.
Warning, do not listen with your spouse, or if you do, tell her/him you have no idea what this song is about, or why anyone would like it.
Thanks in Advance...
Lyrics:
Dug a hole
Covered it up
With lots of leaves and twigs and little things like seemingly harmless questions
Laid a snare
Put in the bait
A little "Honey" and some "Sugar" so my reflexes were late
She got me in the asshole trap
I'm sinking deeper in this crap
It's like I'm knee deep in quicksand
You'd think by now I'd understand
Might as well get comfy
and settle down with a box of wine
It's pretty obvious, you'd think I'd know the warning signs
Wore a wire
Wrote down what I said
Including things I have to wonder how they leaked out of my head
Got advice
From one of her friends
To corroborate the story as I surrender in the end
I apologize in advance for anything I say or do
to lead you to believe the things you think I'm thinking about you
And I surrender all my verbal shield, all arguments I hereby yield
for that which I would offer merely illustrates your position
Here's my latest:
I'm pretty psyched at how the production is working out on this. The choruses are nice and jangly and ready for the radio, if not for one minor detail. I'm psyched at how the drums and bass are sounding.
But I welcome all constructive and destructive feedback.
Warning, do not listen with your spouse, or if you do, tell her/him you have no idea what this song is about, or why anyone would like it.
Thanks in Advance...
Lyrics:
Dug a hole
Covered it up
With lots of leaves and twigs and little things like seemingly harmless questions
Laid a snare
Put in the bait
A little "Honey" and some "Sugar" so my reflexes were late
She got me in the asshole trap
I'm sinking deeper in this crap
It's like I'm knee deep in quicksand
You'd think by now I'd understand
Might as well get comfy
and settle down with a box of wine
It's pretty obvious, you'd think I'd know the warning signs
Wore a wire
Wrote down what I said
Including things I have to wonder how they leaked out of my head
Got advice
From one of her friends
To corroborate the story as I surrender in the end
I apologize in advance for anything I say or do
to lead you to believe the things you think I'm thinking about you
And I surrender all my verbal shield, all arguments I hereby yield
for that which I would offer merely illustrates your position