The Stalker Guy Song

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I'd stay off the booze... it might help your EQ problems too..
 
I'd stay off the booze... it might help your EQ problems too..

diplomatically put. I concure.


Theron.
 
Buuuuurp

Heya Jerry--I like the song-it moves along well- I like songs that use a cliched phrase, in this case the whole "hard to get" hook is easy to remember and instantly recognizable.

The other guys mentioned eq problems hmmm, I guess they mean it doesnt have a real professional sound, but to me it has its own kinda charm. Hows that for diplomatic? Anyway-if I could change anything I'd lose that doubling effect on the vocals-sometimes it worked but it got a little annoying at times too. Is this finished? I'm not sure if I heard a bass and a chugging (not booze) electric guitar would help in my opinion. See ya


Edited:Think I been drinkin I listened to the wrong song! Wow this one is way different heh. I like the main vocal-definetely some wierd shite goin on. I didnt care for the spoken "interlude" and some of the keyboards were way out sounding as well as jumping way out of your mix heh. I like the overall groove of the song-thats a good bass groove to work over-reminds me of van morrison "astral weeks" if he was a Georgia Bulldog and uuuuh ...drunk yeah. Lower some of them keyboards!

Strat
 
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You have the basis of a good tune here but the synths and effects are obnoxious.

A little wine for the belly is good for ya and a beer here and there will keep ya flushed out, but hard stuff is for the dying and you ain't ready to go yet.

BHS;

CR
 
JerryD said:
Is this a hit.

No it's not a hit.

Were restraining orders involved in the process of writing of this song?;)
 
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Don't listen to Strat. Just crank the keyboards up even louder and take a few more shots and it will sound great. Screw EQ, who needs it when you're wasted...yeah!!!:D
 
No DOES really mean no. Trust me on this one. Decent effort. Not a hit though. Keep trying.
 
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