The Shiznit be hitnit.....

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This tune has evolved very nicely.

The foundations are solid. I like the effects you're using on the drums. They sound really huge. Bass guitar is deep and low.

The rhythm guitar is rock solid and has a nice grungy tone. I always like your guitar tones.

Solos throughout are, nice well played and great effects (wah/flange), but I might bring them up a touch at 1:15 and 2:35 and 3:40.

Would still like the vocals in verse one to be a little louder :D . Vocals are nice and clear in the rest of the tune (cool and growly).

Cool bass noodling at the end.

Cool One!

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kick some ass man!! I can't understand some of what youre sayin but it sounds cool non the less
 
This is definitely turning into an ass-kicker. Love those drums and the vocals suit it perfectly. Sick guitar solo, too. Rawk!!!
 
Turn up the solos.
I reckon the vocals are too high in the mix.
Oh & lift the vol on that bass outro - it's nice.
 
I agree with kicking up the solo...it's twisted ..I dig it!And man, Dogman going
Jaco Pastorius on the Bass at the end...you gotaa crank that and strech it out a bit :D ....sounds great man! This rocks!
 
Thanks guys....much appreciated. The solos are 2 different ones, from lbanks and Gorty....totally different styles, but the sort of run into each other pretty cool. I'll punch em up a db or 2, and see how that sounds.
Drums are from Bulls Hit, and that wild bass is lbanks. I think I can easily bring his outro noodle up a bit....I tried some, but only a small amount. I'll boost it a few db also.

Thanks much...... :D
 
Its shaping up very nicely!! Its coming a long way and has some bitching solos. Very cool. :cool:
 
Rockin' tune Dawg! Dark like Zombie! Diggin it. Cheers, Rez
 
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I'd say a lot more, but my tooth hurts...later... :D
 
yeah dawg!!! This is getting dangerous. Love the massive drum sound and the leads are a great touch. As a guitar player I have to say, bring those up some more :D ;)
 
It's an odd kind of arrangement I would say. Verses with solos here and there. I would have liked to hear a good chorus in thier. Thats more of just my personal taste though. I really like the intro. Outro,...seems like everyone playing just says,.."are we done yet?". It works though,..keeps with the live feel of the whole recording.
All of the guitar tones are good,..but,..the drums are REALLY good,...I'd put them more upfront. I think I keep hearing the drum tracks cut out at the end. Something drops out there,..and it's very noticeable.
The solos dont seem to fit. I dont mean placement or tone,...they seem to wander in spots and arent focused. What I mean by that is that they dont follow the rest of the music very well. In spots they do but then it gets awkward.
Other than that,..I agree with above posts,...
Guitar tones good
Good bass tone
Great drums
Vocals fit well and good performance.

I'd still work on the writing.

By the way,..those are real drums,....correct?

Take 'er easy,..
Calwood
 
Hey, thanks all...Calwood, the drums are real...Bulls Hit played them. They sound killer on their own. The solos are by 2 different people, Gorty and lbanks. I edited them, and didn't do a very good job in spots, so that is probably why they seem dissoriented. :o

Everyone else, thank smuch for listening, and giving me some great advice....looks like I have a few things to work on now.... :D
 
Dogman said:
Hey, thanks all...Calwood, the drums are real...Bulls Hit played them. They sound killer on their own. The solos are by 2 different people, Gorty and lbanks. I edited them, and didn't do a very good job in spots, so that is probably why they seem dissoriented. :o

Everyone else, thank smuch for listening, and giving me some great advice....looks like I have a few things to work on now.... :D
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Hey Dogman, I got kind of the same dissoriented feel out of the track too... I really dug that though, I dig that feel of not knowing a structure of a song ahead of time and what's going to happen. You kind of had things popping in here and there, while listening I definitely got a cool vibe out of the somewhat randomness going on. Cool stuff :cool:
 
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