The vocals in the beginning had too much of a "room" sound for my taste in this genre. The beat sounds great. I think it fits quite well. The synth pads seem a bit low-fi. Anyway to make em' more spacious and/or full? The main vocal sound is a bit dull, too. Like it was recorded from a somewhat lower-quality mic, maybe?
The song itself, I found quite enjoyable. If possible, post the whole thing. It always sucks when I like a song, and it ends half-way through.