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wouldn't be my cuppa tea genre-wise, but the piano needs to come down a touch perhaps..

Nice voice! Bring it up!
 
I wasn't so secure with my voice in this one, and maybe I cranked it down a bit subconsciously. Maybe Vice versa for the piano, because I was quite proud of it. I still have a bit to learn. Well, maybe a bit more than a bit. I don't know.
 
As always, strong songwriting and clever pop melodies:D
I like it. Bring the vox up a bit, dont be shy!
Also, are those programed drums or real?

Mike
 
Vocals sound good.

I'm not crazy about the other sounds. Bass sounds okay, but the keys and drums are kind of fake and cheesy sounding. Sorry. :o
 
Programed drums. And Greg, that's alright. I like sounding cheesy. The keys are not programed, I did play them, just quantized the crap out of them.
 
propman said:
Programed drums. And Greg, that's alright. I like sounding cheesy. The keys are not programed, I did play them, just quantized the crap out of them.
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I believe you played them. They're played well. It's just the sound that's kind of off to me. The keys sound kind of cheap. I don't mean your song is cheesy. :o
 
IMHO snare needs to be brought up in level and thickened.
I like the vocal tone;-)
Bass is in the mud me thinks.
Piano could be brought out as well, EQ here would definately help ( reduce all frequencies below 100hz add some high mid low trebble maybe even a tad of reverb, but not too much we don't want to burry the piano, just reposition it;-)
Keep picking at it, and thanks for shareing.

And honestly I'm a noob so take opinion with a grain of salt.
I here some compressor breathing as well.

Hoipe this helps;-)

VB
 
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