"The Giant Pen" (Album Track)

  • Thread starter Thread starter MicFlo
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Yo I've been checking your stuff out for a while now - u on point.

Good work.
 
real nice flow ove a real nice beat...keep up the good work
 
for some reason i had a hard time following the story in this one but thats a hell of a concept. u got quite an imagination
 
Yo sorry i have been missing in action fellaz last two weeks i been in the lab on the slab for them dollars. but i'm making my rounds now and hittin every body with that said:

STOP to much going on in there at the same timeyou gotta cut it back or have sombody else spit to it ya vocals are clashing with the beat. i'm having to focus to hard to hear and understand you. Its those strings it sounds like you battling with them. the beat is tight by itself tho. i cant understand your chorus it might be going to fast or you might need a popper stopper or something for the silbilance. keep at it tho
 
micflo all yo shit is original im feeling you i get lost in the lyrics but them shyts just be flowin so smooth and original
 
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