Real nice song. I really liked it.
I liked the electric/acoustic thing that's going on. Real pretty melody and nice lyrics.
There's some real good opportunity for harmonies in the chrous. Doubling the lead vox during the chorus would be cool too. Vocals are a little dry. A little more use of a subtle reverb might be nice.
The volume on the various vocal parts during the outro are a bit soft.
The snare could probably be pulled back just a bit. I love the sound of it though. Just a little strong.
Some very slight vocals pitchiness (e.g., 1:19 on the word "see"). Very slight though. Did you cut-and-paste the chorus? I notice the same pitchiness elsewhere at the same spot.
Love the song.
I liked the electric/acoustic thing that's going on. Real pretty melody and nice lyrics.
There's some real good opportunity for harmonies in the chrous. Doubling the lead vox during the chorus would be cool too. Vocals are a little dry. A little more use of a subtle reverb might be nice.
The volume on the various vocal parts during the outro are a bit soft.
The snare could probably be pulled back just a bit. I love the sound of it though. Just a little strong.
Some very slight vocals pitchiness (e.g., 1:19 on the word "see"). Very slight though. Did you cut-and-paste the chorus? I notice the same pitchiness elsewhere at the same spot.
Love the song.