The Dream Maker - Need your comments and thoughts please!

[aspi17]

Hi!
I could really use some fresh ears here!
I have been mixing this track for such a long time that I have lost all perspective.
This is the best I could do. Hope the quality of the mp3 is good enough.
Feel free to comment on any aspect of the song!
Thanks!

http://soundcloud.com/ziadsarrouh/the-dream-maker-1

Title: The Dream Maker
Artist: area.51
DAW: Logic 9
Audio Interface: Focusrite Saffire Pro 10
All instruments played live. Drums played on Alesis electronic drumkit which triggers samples form ESX24.
Vocals written and fed to Fruity Loops' Speech Generator. Output processed in Logic.

Thanks!

 

[gcapitani]

I liked it. A kind of Pink Floyd meets Kraftwerk. What a trip! Nice!

 

[TripleM]

Sounds OK. It's all pre-generated stuff, so I don't know that there's much to comment on mixwise. I think it's mostly a question of sound selection.

Maybe one mix thing is to double check your low end on several different systems and against pro mixes. I'm on small headphones so it's tough for me to tell. But that low end seems pretty strong. Might sound crap-ass on a bigger system.

 

[aspi17]

The Dream Maker - Revised version

Hi. I noticed I had uploaded a premix without bass! Here it is now remixed again.
Hope you'll notice the difference.
Awaiting your comments and suggestions.
And for your info, only the vocals are pre generated. All the other instruments were played live.
Thanks, peace and chill....

http://soundcloud.com/ziadsarrouh/the-dream-maker-2

 

[WhiteStrat]

Works for me. Sounds very cool. Lots of layers and texture. Good work!

 

[Chili]

No need to start a new thread, just keep it going here. I deleted your other post.

I'll give this song a listen later tonight.

cheers,