hi,
I'm pretty new to songwriting so all help is appreciated !
I'm writing a song about the second between triggering a gun and receiving the bullet
so the 'singer' is looking in the barrel and describes what's happening / what he feels
parts of the song could be like this:
.. looking in the barrel of the gun ..
.. life flashes before my eyes ..
.. heart pounds the blood ..
.. will I scream? ..
.. will I be noticed? ..
.. I feel the bullet ..
.. I feel the steel ..
.. I feel the cold ..
I was wondering if anybody had any nice catching sentence I could use
or an idea / a twist I could use in this theme
thx in advance !!
I'm pretty new to songwriting so all help is appreciated !
I'm writing a song about the second between triggering a gun and receiving the bullet
so the 'singer' is looking in the barrel and describes what's happening / what he feels
parts of the song could be like this:
.. looking in the barrel of the gun ..
.. life flashes before my eyes ..
.. heart pounds the blood ..
.. will I scream? ..
.. will I be noticed? ..
.. I feel the bullet ..
.. I feel the steel ..
.. I feel the cold ..
I was wondering if anybody had any nice catching sentence I could use
or an idea / a twist I could use in this theme
thx in advance !!