Singing to the choir
Good piano sound, the bass sounds really 'seperated' and distant from the mids and top, I guess that's the mics seperating things.
Your voice is much smoother and more peaceful when singing with the piano. Even thought the subject matter is quite ... energetic. That's your wisdom again, you are 'resigned' and 'in submission' to
the tornado, and maybe that is the 'tornado of life' ... yes ?
I'm hearing your 'grand metaphor', I like, I like ...
I wrote a song about Hurricaines ... as I had to evacuate from my house here in Jennings, Louisiana twice last hurricaine season. One of those times I had to take my mom to Shreveport for cancer surgery, and she's doing real well now, because the Hospital she was scheduled at got closed down, and they transferred their operations up to Shreveport, my hometown anyway, so we went up there.
We almost had to stay at the Louisiana State University in Shreveport gymnasium which the Red Cross had outfitted for refugees. But an old family friend got us a hotel room and I thank the Red Cross for that very much.
When I got back to where my house is, I saw folks in town working together to repair the damage, and a scene of a group of carpenters working on a carport really set me off. They all had their arms raised above their heads, and they were stretching to get at the underside of the carport awning to hammer and do this and that under there.
So this hook, this tagline popped into my head ... 'raising the house of Jesus' ... yes
And I thought of my yoga practice and how that had given me great soloce and internal strength during the evacuation, and dealing with mom's recent cancer diagnosis, and having to run away to shreveport from the hurricaine, and the lonliness of being on the road, and then in your home town ... not really knowing anybody anymore ...
In yoga, one of the 'exercises' or 'postures' is to raise the arms above the head and stretch and breath ... reach to the heavens so to speak, much like the congregation in a church raises their arms in the throes of the passion of praise.
So I wrote this song, 'Oh Hurricaine Blow'. I'm going to work it up, the piano you are playing just happens to be a churchy sounding kind of piano ya know, that 'standard' upright you find in the choir loft and in the practice room. And the subject matter, and your faith, they remind me of this song that I haven't done justice to.
' Matress pulled over and tied over my head !!! LOL !!! '
that was a very nice performance, the piano you played it very 'ominously' as if the storm is approaching ... I'm trying to capture that feeling for 'Oh Hurricaine Blow', and then the piano and instruments change to represent the storm having arrived, and then they eye of the storm ... then the back-edge ... and then both the repair of the community, the fabric of the community, and the repair of ... the self and the internal spirt. It's a trinity theme in a way.
I'll post this song one day, we'll all get into it. I really need a lot of voices for the chorus, it really needs a church choir on it.
And there is a lot of room in this for blues fiddle.
It's a keeper, as long as it doesn't blow away my hard drive !