Testing the equipment (and self)

[Feigner]

First full track. opinions, thoughts, and critiques please...

It's the first full track i've done. opinions, thoughts, and critiques welcome.
Thanks in advance

Title: Hold -

 

[Dogman]

I really like the sounds I'm hearing, and the beat of the song. Very deliberate. What is your setup? I'd like to hear more of the regular vocals to this, as the voice seems to fit the mood of the song.
Ed

 

[Feigner]

Mic: MXL V63M
Pre: Soundtech qm4
SC: Emu 1820m
Guitar: Fender
Bass: Yamaha
Prog:Sonar pro4
Misc Plug-ins

etc etc etc...

Thanks for the good feed - any other takers?

 

[thehymns]

The snare is really loud, can't really make out the guitars. Kind of a creepy song. Kid Koala mixed with A Perfect Circle.

 

[SnakeDog5050]

Nice heavy bass... really fills up the room... the snare sounds a bit thin, maybe you could thicken that up some. The song gets freaky, but there's nothing wrong with freaky. Freaky with a lot of bass sounds good to me. Maybe you could even mess with the channels and have the voices move across left to right and come from different places in the stereo field. That'd make the track even creepier. The high to low voice at 2:19 is cool. I can't even tell a thing of what the special effect dude is saying, but that doesn't matter

Neat track.. sounds like I'm in the dark being followed by something creepy or something. Nice though, it's always good to get a feel out of a song.

 

[Feigner]

The snare was mixed loud on purpose... not sure it is meant to be that loud though.. I've listened to the mix in the car and other stereo's and appears fine... will still mess with it though...guitars are not meant to take up the foreground... maybe a bad choice though...again can still mess with it... I had thought of panning the voice and since you brought it up maybe I'll play with that too... would be cool...

thanks for all the cool feedback...