Sorry dude the rain sounds like deep frying in MP3 format. Maybe some verb or pull it back so that it's less harsh.
Is it me or are the drums leaning to the left.
The poor bass player - the work is buried either give it more space or EQ it back into the mix.
Do you have any other guitar tones available to you? - The two I can hear are a little over used - the lead line has a much better tone until the speed work comes in then it sound very samey.
The drums are also too in my face for my taste.
Things sound better at 2.40 when the guitars back off a little.
Good recording - just needs some mixing & a guitar tone that will make it YOU rather than just another 00's metal band.