the hi-hatt is to loud
the basdrum is to soft
put up the lead vocal a bit
maybe 'dub' the rythem guit and put it on opposite side , a bit like as you did in the end of the song.
I record High School Students sometimes, it is hilarious to hear them talk, sounds like your song. Overall the mix is pretty good. The kick (as stated previously) needs to come up to drive a little more.
the hi-hatt is to loud
the basdrum is to soft
put up the lead vocal a bit
maybe 'dub' the rythem guit and put it on opposite side , a bit like as you did in the end of the song.
I always bury the bassdrum because I will always do a low cut on it. I took that off completely and I cut a little treble off drum track. I compressed with vocals a little more and tried to put them up front a little more.