Take This Down

[Irwin abrigo]

I found myself doing a lot of club songs these days.

Feedback welcome.


https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/take-this-down

 

[easlern]

The bass is pretty loud I think. It's a great sounding patch though. I couldn't hear a kick at all (maybe it's not supposed to have one?) the drops in and out of the beat seemed a little odd. Got a cool/chaotic feel about it, I like the random samples.

 

[GONZO-X]

hey irwin,
i guess i just dont' get this style of music,
it sounds like it's all programmed, and nothing is actually played.
it's not really a song.

sounds like background music to a victoria secrets show.

mix isn't bad, tho.....

i just want to hear some real musicianship. show me something.

 

[GONZO-X]

sorry Irwin abrigo


not trying to be rude here, easlern, jut trying to be honest.

i mean, i can offer insights, and opinions, just like everyone else here, just like you dude,
or i can just leave you to it.

 

[Irwin abrigo]

Easlern & Gonzo-x, I need to hear the truth (I can take it) so your insights, and opinions will not hurt at all. What I am really looking for is a producer who wants to work with me.

I thank you guys so much for your reply.

Irwin

 

[GONZO-X]

Easlern & Gonzo-x, I need to hear the truth (I can take it) so your insights, and opinions will not hurt at all. What I am really looking for is a producer who wants to work with me.

I thank you guys so much for your reply.

Irwin

try blending real instruments (even if it's just some hand percussion) with the programmed stuff....
keep what works.
slowly, work in more individual tracks of, say, keyboard riffs, and work out some of the repetitive pieces in exchange for cool little melodies....

 

[Irwin abrigo]

Hi Gonzo-x, Thanks for the advice.