Stratomaster
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Greetings all. Been working on this song for the last two weeks or so, i haven't been happy with my vocals or the mix in general. Today i went and laid down a few vocal tracks, and did a quick mix and i think it's sounding pretty good, let me know what you think could be improved. My first impression is that the slide guitar could come up a bit and the vocals could sit better in certain places. The vocal track is 3 different takes run to a bus with a compressor and eq, i probably need to get more detailed with the volume control on the vocals....
This song is a collaboration between me and my brother. He sent me this excellent set of lyrics which i will share with you all. The song is called "Sun sets on the Sea"
Thanks for your time and any comments you might have.
Strat
He traveled by horse through fields of green
Till he reached the sands of Aberdeen
A man distraught in search of peace
From his past, trying to be released
A darker time lies in his wake
Was his whole life, one big mistake?
A man of stature, held in high regard
He hates this life wants to just discard
All the men at his command
All Those that work upon his lands
Just a man he wants to be
Go where the Sun sets on the sea
He never wanted any of this
He wanted his own time
But his destiny, it was not his
He was born of the bloodline
Just a man he seeks to be
Fled by night
To where
the Sun sets on the sea
He steps down from his horse
Thrust his sword into the sand
No longer will I lead this life
Just myself I will command
The years went by the man grew old
They found him stiff, his body cold
He became the man he wanted to be
As he left this world
Where the sun sets on the sea
Sun Sets On The Sea by NovaBasa | Nova Basa | Free Listening on SoundCloud
New version up a whole step....
Sun Sets On The Sea (3) by NovaBasa | Nova Basa | Free Listening on SoundCloud
This song is a collaboration between me and my brother. He sent me this excellent set of lyrics which i will share with you all. The song is called "Sun sets on the Sea"
Thanks for your time and any comments you might have.
Strat
He traveled by horse through fields of green
Till he reached the sands of Aberdeen
A man distraught in search of peace
From his past, trying to be released
A darker time lies in his wake
Was his whole life, one big mistake?
A man of stature, held in high regard
He hates this life wants to just discard
All the men at his command
All Those that work upon his lands
Just a man he wants to be
Go where the Sun sets on the sea
He never wanted any of this
He wanted his own time
But his destiny, it was not his
He was born of the bloodline
Just a man he seeks to be
Fled by night
To where
the Sun sets on the sea
He steps down from his horse
Thrust his sword into the sand
No longer will I lead this life
Just myself I will command
The years went by the man grew old
They found him stiff, his body cold
He became the man he wanted to be
As he left this world
Where the sun sets on the sea
Sun Sets On The Sea by NovaBasa | Nova Basa | Free Listening on SoundCloud
New version up a whole step....
Sun Sets On The Sea (3) by NovaBasa | Nova Basa | Free Listening on SoundCloud
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