Suggestions for this song?

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guitarmonkus

guitarmonkus

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This is the first song I've ever written. i completed it a couple of days ago, but now I'm having second thoughts. It was also my first attempt at home recording, but I would just like some advice on the song structure and other song related topics.

If anyone has anything, please share!

Thanks!
Thom

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=481924
 
Tried but nothing happens?

The link's ok but the song doesn't play?? at least for me..
 
I like the song and the arrangement. Somebody will inevitably tell you that the intro is too long, but I don't mind that for this style. I think the recording and mixing of it could be better. The fuzzy guitar on the right side is a bit too fuzzy for my taste, and maybe too loud. I think the backing vocals during the "chorus" are too muddy sounding. They kinda have a queens of the stoneage sound, maybe? that's cool. And I think you need to even out the lead vox volume a bit. There is some nice funky bass stuff goin on that I like. I don't know what else. I'm listening on computer speakers, at a pretty low volume, so don't put too much weight in my comments. The whole thing just sounds sorta midrange muddy to me. I'd like to hear it brightened up a bit.
 
Thanks for the comments man. I will look into brightening it up a bit. Maybe with some compression? I dont know. I agree that the guitar is a bit fuzzy. I didn't notice until I started mixing, and I just haven't got a chance to re-record them. No effects I add seem to help.

Again, thanks for your time and comments dude. I appreciate it!

Thom
 
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