Sucky Rock ballad

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Once again, I'm posting a tune right after finishing tracking it. So, I'm sure my ears are a little out of whack and the levels might not be right.

So, any help, as always, will be appreciated.

The last thing I tracked was the drums, so they might be way too loud or way too low. At this point, I've lost perspective.

Tahnx.

FROZEN
 
I'm kinda under the weather and just realized my ears are all clogged, so I'm gonna listen when my ears pop open. :mad:
 
Sucky???:confused: Why ???
This sounds great Rami, you've got a great hookline in the chorus and those harmonies sound wonderful! Have you got flanger on the voice in the verse, sounds really good. Drums have the right level for me and sound nice and crisp as usual. Guitars are rockin' too. Another great tune, but coming from you it's no surprise!

Joey:):):):)
 
joeym said:
Sucky???:confused: Why ???
This sounds great Rami, you've got a great hookline in the chorus and those harmonies sound wonderful! Have you got flanger on the voice in the verse, sounds really good. Drums have the right level for me and sound nice and crisp as usual. Guitars are rockin' too. Another great tune, but coming from you it's no surprise!

Joey:):):):)
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Thanx a lot Joey!

Yeah, I have some flange on the vocals in the verses only. I'm not a big fan of vocal effects, usually. But I thought it needed something like that in the verses. Thanx for the listen and the kind words, bro. :cool:
 
Fuck it, just listened anyway. No mix comments, but the song was really cool. Nice change-up Rami. :)
 
RAMI,
I'm listening with H/phones...
The effect is effective (sorry)!
Nice melancholy vibe and good lyrics.
The pre chorus might use a little punch - little vol boost of something as it takes a cut after the flanger is dropped.
Sonically it seems mid era Alice Cooper - Steve Hunter time!
Nice work - no nits from me.
 
Another classic Rami - your writing, performance and recording continue to be top shelf stuff!
The mix sounds good to me - drums (you asked) don't seem too loud.

This would be a good one for your band to play...

:D:cool::D:cool:
 
Wow get some Little wing vibe on the verse.
Very hendrixish playin:)

First thing that comes to mind is to mellow the distorted guitar a bit, make it cleaner.
Maybe a bit more verb on the guitars as well would be cool.

Song is damn cool, great arrangment.
Vox are smashin on this, dig the flangy vox:cool:

Your drums sound really great on this one, same set up?
 
JonPaulP said:
The mix sounds clean and balanced to me.
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Thank you.
rayc said:
RAMI,
I'm listening with H/phones...
The effect is effective (sorry)!
Nice melancholy vibe and good lyrics.
The pre chorus might use a little punch - little vol boost of something as it takes a cut after the flanger is dropped.
Sonically it seems mid era Alice Cooper - Steve Hunter time!
Nice work - no nits from me.
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Thanx Ray. Hunter and Wagner, what a duo at the time. I'll always take Alice Cooper as a compliment, even though it never crossed my mind for this tune. The pre-chorus is a little softer, delivery-wise, but I was hoping it would make the chorus more powerful. Thanx, man.
ido1957 said:
Another classic Rami - your writing, performance and recording continue to be top shelf stuff!
The mix sounds good to me - drums (you asked) don't seem too loud.

This would be a good one for your band to play...

:D:cool::D:cool:
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Thanx Ido. I was thinking the same thing as far as playing it live with the cover band. But it's a slow tune, and we have so much trouble slowing down the party, most of the time. Even our slow covers, we often skip them because the dance floor's packed with people rocking. But it would be a good live tune. Thanx for the listen and compliments.
Nakatira said:
Wow get some Little wing vibe on the verse.
Very hendrixish playin:)

First thing that comes to mind is to mellow the distorted guitar a bit, make it cleaner.
Maybe a bit more verb on the guitars as well would be cool.

Song is damn cool, great arrangment.
Vox are smashin on this, dig the flangy vox:cool:

Your drums sound really great on this one, same set up?
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Thanx Nak. Do you mean I should mellow out the distorted guitars in the chorus, or the distorted one that creeps in during the verses????

"Little Wing" huh??? Cool. Thanx a lot.

Yes, I'm using the same set-up as always. Finally getting to know this little room.

:cool:
 
I`m thinkin alltogether it sounds a bit to clinic distortion to me.
I think some more tube`y distortion perhaps some old fuzz would be cooler.

Dont get me wrong bro this works, I just think the verse has this perfect hendrix vibe to it wich could be cool with less distorted guitars , perhaps I get to caugt up in the 70`s:D
 
Sounds pretty darn good to me. I don't hear anything out of whack.
 
Pretty nice work. I really enjoyed the bridge.

I'm not so impressed by the flanger though. To me it sounded a lot like some kind of auto-tune gone wrong.

Guitars sound great. No complaints drum-wise.
 
Nakatira said:
I`m thinkin alltogether it sounds a bit to clinic distortion to me.
I think some more tube`y distortion perhaps some old fuzz would be cooler.

Dont get me wrong bro this works, I just think the verse has this perfect hendrix vibe to it wich could be cool with less distorted guitars , perhaps I get to caugt up in the 70`s:D
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I get what you're saying. Guitar is still the thing I have the most trouble with, sound-wise. Thanx brother.
 
Another great song, Rami!

If I could change something in the mix:
side by side with some of your other songs (I have in the HD), I feel a certain lack in the bass drum and bass guitar low frequencies on this one.
Nothing that sounds bad, obviously;same vibe, just not so "fat" as usual.

Arrangement is well done.And I like the guitars tone and solo too.

Ciro
 
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