Student Original

[dynis]

I really like this song! My thoughts are similar to everyone else. The last one sounds the best to me; it's the most dynamic in my opinion. The bass could go up a bit and I think it would sound great without taking away from the rest of the song.

The vocalist has a lot of potential. His voice is really great, but it sounds like maybe he hasn't had much practice yet. I bet with more practice and as his confidence in his voice builds he'll really shine. I do agree with others that some harmony on this track would sound good. I actually want to say it would sound good with some female background vocals, but I bet even using the same vocalist for the harmony would do the trick if you don't have any other vocalists on hand.

The kick drum isn't audible; the tambourine sound makes up for it a bit, but I think I'd prefer hearing the kick drum.

Overall great melody and composition. Really enjoyed it.

 

[dynis]

I really like this song! My thoughts are similar to everyone else. The last one sounds the best to me; it's the most dynamic in my opinion. The bass could go up a bit and I think it would sound great without taking away from the rest of the song.

The vocalist has a lot of potential. His voice is really great, but it sounds like maybe he hasn't had much practice yet. I bet with more practice and as his confidence in his voice builds he'll really shine. I do agree with others that some harmony on this track would sound good. I actually want to say it would sound good with some female background vocals, but I bet even using the same vocalist for the harmony would do the trick if you don't have any other vocalists on hand.

The kick drum isn't audible; the tambourine sound makes up for it a bit, but I think I'd prefer hearing the kick drum.

Overall great melody and composition. Really enjoyed it.

 

[GuitarLegend]

I think the last version sounds better to my ears. The vocals sound warmer and more natural.

I am inclined to agree with you on that. I was obsessing over the loudness as some still do these days. I am trying to let go of that in favour of improved dynamics but I think I have a long way to go where mastering is concerned. Thank you for your comments

 

[toad_uk]

Last night this song popped into my head and I could not get it out. Not that I was that bothered about getting it out.

 

[GuitarLegend]

I really like this song! My thoughts are similar to everyone else. The last one sounds the best to me; it's the most dynamic in my opinion. The bass could go up a bit and I think it would sound great without taking away from the rest of the song.

The vocalist has a lot of potential. His voice is really great, but it sounds like maybe he hasn't had much practice yet. I bet with more practice and as his confidence in his voice builds he'll really shine. I do agree with others that some harmony on this track would sound good. I actually want to say it would sound good with some female background vocals, but I bet even using the same vocalist for the harmony would do the trick if you don't have any other vocalists on hand.

The kick drum isn't audible; the tambourine sound makes up for it a bit, but I think I'd prefer hearing the kick drum.

Overall great melody and composition. Really enjoyed it.

Thank you for the kind words. I am hoping to get him back for some more recording sessions. He says he is keen but very busy with other things. I can't help wondering how nusy he would be if he could get a few tracks down. He does have potential

 

[GuitarLegend]

Last night this song popped into my head and I could not get it out. Not that I was that bothered about getting it out.

Thank you, its a great advertisement for a song when it doesn't leave your head although, to be sure, there are songs you don't even like that won't leave your head, lol

 

[joro]

upbeat tune...I like upbeat tunes.......vox sounds slightly lo fi....perhaps a little drier might be cool too....
kick is low in the mix...brass is thin and dry.....needs verb...I like the tambourine though...

Real good song for any age...never mind 17.