Stratospheric (Electro)

[frank1985]

Looking for some feedback on this Jarre-esque track I've been working on. I was actually very close to ditching it but every track is an opportunity to learn I guess so I stuck with it.

stratospheric (temp upload, forum feedback) by FC1985 | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[TripleM]

Cool ambient piece.

Kind of a quick start. It could use a quick transition at the very beginning.

Synths sound good.

Kick might be just a bit loud.

 

[maestro_dmc]

Love it. Forgot what I was listening to. Thought I had some ambient radio station playing on the ipad.

 

[ajsajs]

Cool groove overall, certain things could maybe pack a bit more punch. The bass could have some deeper tones and feels a bit muddy/thin? The lead synth that comes in at 0:46 seems a touch too loud, but just personal preference.

Really like the hi-hat stretches happening starting at 1:18. Cool transition at 1:50 and good panning of the hi-hat. You should put more panning of instruments throughout.

 

[Music Box]

Great work. Jarre influence can be heard but it's ok. Quirky nice melodies with fun sounds