Speaking of cliches....

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Ran across this today and found it interesting:

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Of course, this means I have to re-write about half my songs...;)


I guess when all is said and done, pushing the envelope just isn't enough. At the end of the day you have to be thinking outside the box... It is like, so important!:D


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Aaron Cheney said:
Ran across this today and found it interesting:

click here

Of course, this means I have to re-write about half my songs...;)


I guess when all is said and done, pushing the envelope just isn't enough. At the end of the day you have to be thinking outside the box... It is like, so important!:D


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I absolutley agree were on the same base.

SoMm
 
cliches wouldn't be so annoying if people didn't say them so often :p


(what did he say?)
 
Very funny Aaron....Did I miss something or did they leave out my most un-favorite. Lately I ve noticed that more and more people, even well educated ones who should know better, are replacing every verb with "goes". For Example: "So she goes yeah and then goes all nuts with it. So inside the car he goes big stereo and his friend goes all performance you know ???


Should we have a contest to see who can use "goes" the most times in a song??? LOL


write on...chazba
 
A lot of people use "goes" and "like" together, as in: "I hate when she goes, like, all bling-bling."

Ick.

My biggest grammatical pet peaves are redundant sentances like:

"And also too...."

or sentences with double negatives like:

"Ain't never picked me no cotton"


Actually, that's a triple negative! Impressive!

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Aaron Cheney said:
A lot of people use "goes" and "like" together, as in: "I hate when she goes, like, all bling-bling."

Ick.

My biggest grammatical pet peaves are redundant sentances like:

"And also too...."

or sentences with double negatives like:

"Ain't never picked me no cotton"


Actually, that's a triple negative! Impressive!

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Yes, but a double positive can never imply a negative.






Yeah, right.
 
And the classic quadruple negative!

And there ain't no nothin' we can't love each other through....

Bonus points for naming the famous theme song from which the line originates!
 
stonepiano said:
And the classic quadruple negative!

And there ain't no nothin' we can't love each other through....

Bonus points for naming the famous theme song from which the line originates!

Family Ties!
 
Ace and TJ ....

is a syndicated radio show some of you may be familiar with ....one bit they do is sometimes when, a usually young girl, calls in and starts using "like" doesn't matter what her point is they ask Yankee Pete How many and he gives the number of "likes" she used ,maybe you have to be there but it's pretty funny ....one chick called in talked for about a minute ...she had 25 "likes" ....but the sad thing is it's becoming commonplace before long it will be accepted.....:(
 
Well, the fact of the matter is that, in terms of writing lyrics, it's all been done before. A good writer just has to move the goal-posts, be thinking outside the box, push the envelope, so to speak, and literally strive to touch base with the listening audience. With all due respect to the writer of this article, sometimes clichés sell. In a nutshell, clichés can be a positive or a negative.

To be perfectly honest, writing is an art ... it's not rocket science. I've been told before that my lyrics sometimes have clichés and I'm like ... "I hear what you're saying, dude, but this is value-added stuff ! We're just not singing from the same hymn sheet." Outside of my lyric writing I basically steer clear of using any clichés at all.

Bear with me on this ...

The average lyric sheet contains 180 words ( ballpark figure ) and up to 24 phrases. Sometimes your between a rock and a hard place to come up with the perfect phrase ... that awesome hook & line that lures them in. It literally boggles the mind to think that, going forward, I'd have to do a cliché check along with the spell check. Like, do I really need to address the issue and on what basis? Because my cliché may irritate someone? Because it may be a barrier to effective communication? Puleeeze! I'm certainly not going to spend 24/7 worrying about such trivial matters. I'm a "glass half full " kinda guy and like to keep a positive attitude.

The bottom line is this ... Do what feels right. Write what feels right! At the end of the day, you'll feel better about yourself and your lyrics. Will it make you a successful song writer? Probably not. Will it make you a happier person ... Absolutely!


Note : The above writing exercise is the result of multiple expressos at 9PM and nothing to do at 3AM. Anyone who tells me how many clichés I used has less to do than I did.

Regards,
Mountaineer
 
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