Yeah, some very nice sounds, and it had me listening and waiting to see what happened - that's pretty good, considering I'm a big fan of strong rhythm and rhyme.
I listened to Love of Vanity.
Here are some random impressions and thoughts:
* I'd like to use that wave-rolling-in sound on a song. A real song with real music. If you trust your daughter and me collaborating, get her in touch with me. That's exactly the sort of thing I'd like to have behind some of my music.
* I think the vocal could have been done better, despite the considerable masking of it with effect.
* It's okay to call it Love of Vanity, because that's a cool title and this is a cool track. But there's no obvious connection, right? Here's my point: you don't have to name your song something that connects with what people hear when they listen to it, but it helps. I mean, I heard something like this at the end:
"If/As I'm the only person who'll look back and look into my eyes, my self"
Well, that explains the title. But damn, who's gonna study the piece that hard, aside from me? LOL
In other words: redo the vocal, and make it slightly more intelligible.
I'm on my third run through. Nice piece. I love the sound. I'm getting used to it...
