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Ok I jotted this down real quick please give me some feedback. I haven't been around as much to critique other peoples stuff, but I will this weekend.
Balls to Love
Odd we are strangers
when we know each other
Once thought we could be
meant for one another
Somehow we went the wrong direction
at the place where love and hate meet
Give anything to be back
at that intersection
Instead of being the lonely headlights
Heading the wrong way
down a one way street
I’ve become background noise to you
I scream but you don’t know it
All along I shoulda knew
That I’d be a victim of circumstance
A man that loves must be a fool
Or have the balls to take a chance
The clock on the wall shows
an hour past empty
Hands and heart similarly
Fools rush in
where the brave lay broken
Dashed on rocks of vows unspoken
the poisoned I planted tree bears fruit
I've been infected
From the tainted seeds
While my torment becomes the flame
that my passion feeds
I’ve eaten the fruit and lost Eden
But for love I'd take the chance again
Joe Ford
Balls to Love
Odd we are strangers
when we know each other
Once thought we could be
meant for one another
Somehow we went the wrong direction
at the place where love and hate meet
Give anything to be back
at that intersection
Instead of being the lonely headlights
Heading the wrong way
down a one way street
I’ve become background noise to you
I scream but you don’t know it
All along I shoulda knew
That I’d be a victim of circumstance
A man that loves must be a fool
Or have the balls to take a chance
The clock on the wall shows
an hour past empty
Hands and heart similarly
Fools rush in
where the brave lay broken
Dashed on rocks of vows unspoken
the poisoned I planted tree bears fruit
I've been infected
From the tainted seeds
While my torment becomes the flame
that my passion feeds
I’ve eaten the fruit and lost Eden
But for love I'd take the chance again
Joe Ford