ok... I'm new here, but from what I've seen I really like it here. I'm a youngster but I've been writing my own music for about 6 years now... unfortunately the only outside opinions I get on my lyrics is from my band members who happen to be my best friends and not critics. So I was hoping to get some imput on some lyrics here...
condesension you and your kind
quiet convention the same state of mind
leads to conviction that you'll find
your own invention of the time
eyes closed never seeing the light
forever posed as the religious right
Pharises in God's sight
CHORUS
Brainwashed
It's no state of mind
Brainwashed
Revolution dying
Brainwashed
It's no state of mind
Brainwashed
And nothing's fine
Kill us softly kill us loud
Kill us often but we're still proud
Don't buy into your holiness
Don't buy into your greed
Don't buy into your faithfulness
Don't buy into your deed
CHORUS
do you remember me?
do you remember me?
you will remember me
you will remember me
CHORUS
condesension you and your kind
quiet convention the same state of mind
leads to conviction that you'll find
your own invention of the time
eyes closed never seeing the light
forever posed as the religious right
Pharises in God's sight
CHORUS
Brainwashed
It's no state of mind
Brainwashed
Revolution dying
Brainwashed
It's no state of mind
Brainwashed
And nothing's fine
Kill us softly kill us loud
Kill us often but we're still proud
Don't buy into your holiness
Don't buy into your greed
Don't buy into your faithfulness
Don't buy into your deed
CHORUS
do you remember me?
do you remember me?
you will remember me
you will remember me
CHORUS